Comments on Book Review

To Adralyn:
It's a good post, but it lacks a beginning and the conclusion can be better. It can boost the word count from 818 to at least 1000. There's not much to say because most of it is based on opinions, but please capitalize and punctuate correctly. Overall, the post is good. But i'm wondering if you chose your question to write about instead of the given? It doesn't seem like your chose one of Mr. Sutherland's.

To Bany:
The way you say "you guys should read it!" at the end after a detailed explanation of events in the novel makes it more persuading than a persuasive paragraph written about it (my opinion). Like Adralyn's post, there are a few grammar errors, but they can easily be corrected. On the other hand, there is pretty much only one opinion in this book review, the exact opposite of Adralyn. Good Luck.

To Saber:
Nice post, but maybe go into more depth in the beginning instead of providing a summary? Furthermore, you barely passed the word limit yourself so please don't comment on mine. The last two paragraphs somewhat go deep into the meaning of the events you talked about. It helps how you also went into depth for your response to them. Good job. But I don't agree that "your book post was god"(Bany)